Saturday, September 29, 2012

30 Second Ad - Part 2

Today I worked on the 30 second ad as it kept coming up on my to-do list. The text for the ad is:



If you're overwhelmed with too much to do, Kravatz Inc. has a new product called Time-creator. It's an Excel spreadsheet, that  helps you  reach goals, stay focused and deal with interruptions.
The software features a todo list, alarms and time tracking. This will enable you to get more done in less time.
There is no product on the market like this.
Go to our website at time-creator.com to view a demo or try the software.
We are limiting the number of free downloads we will allow,  so do it today

After 9 takes here's what I came up with:


 One of the things I realize about doing this work is that you won't get it perfect and the Nike "Just Do It" slogan is very appropriate. It doesn't need to be perfect, but needs to get done. Perfection can come later.

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